Hi,

I've just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you please provide me some feedback ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your service for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

Hello there, some feedback would be very much appreciated..

Greetings! Please consider my version of the logo for your company, do not leave without attention and positive feedback.

Some feedback, Please... good or bad, both are welcome...
Thank you