Hi there,

Could I please have some feedback on my design :)

Cheers,
Frigo

Hey there, just submitted my concept, have a check.
Best,

Dear Project Owner,
i already submit my design..... and i'm waiting for your reply.... thank u.....

Hi

May I have your feedback please?
If you could let me know if my submission on the right track or wrong track that would actually help me understand what you are after.

Thanks
Arthur

Read the brief and then please explain to me how this design is different than what you didn't want to see.

Quite confused as this is what you didn't want from your own words.