any feedback/rating?

Thanks for submitting your design. I will be sitting down with my associate who is the driver on the creative aspect of this project to get his feedback and opinion. Personally I like the simple and clean look with the connection points above the company name.

Hi, Can you please provide feedback on my submission.
thanks,
sajithgopalan.

Please let me know, are my design so close or not?, if yes where's part of that should be change?