feedback me on design #36842532 and #36842541 , regards

Hi There,
I’ve just submitted a design for your project (ID:#36844039)
It would mean a lot if you could take a look at the description, where I’ve shared the thoughts behind the concept.
I look forward to hearing your feedback!
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,
Ha.Connick

PLEASE COULD YOU CHECK MY ENTRY :)