Quote -- wording for travel poster & T-shirt

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I want to create a poster and t-shirt using a quote by Edward Abbey about Utah. I've attached an attempt I did myself. I'm happy with my concept but am wanting someone to execute the idea better and make it look more polished. I think the quote may be more impactful with different spacing, specifically if "IF IRONED" and "OUT FLAT" were on their own lines, and therefore bigger, and if the following words were smaller? I'm unsure which of our Timber Moose logos works better in the space.
Target Market(s)
Active lifestyle people who love Utah
Industry/Entity Type
travel / tourism
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