feedback me on design 30600965 and 30600967 , thanks

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #30603325, #30603324). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED.

plz chq #30622009

plz chq #30622088 also

Please feedback on my submission. No bad ratings please.
Thanks

Please check my entries ,#30600492 , #30600494

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