Please check my design #29845958 and provide your feedback. Thank you.

Feedback my work (#29855837)

Sir
I submitted my design and hope you like it and give me 4/5 star ratting but If you don’t like my entries kindly left me without star instant of low star(1/2/3).
Because I spend a lot of time for your design.

hi project owner. please check the update I made especially for your company. feel free to post feedback if you want changes. Thank you.
regards.

Dear Sir,
Possible to give feedback on design #29878968 would be much appreciate.
Thanks.