Feedback please..

I went and gave star ratings to the designs that have the style I’m looking for.

Hi sir /mam my design (#28984387) you rated 4star any changes for this logo.i am avelable on 24/7. Thank you.

kindly feedback me on my new submission design #28999495 and #28999496 , thanks

Hi sir /mam my design's (#28997470, #29009024) you rated 3star any changes for this logo .I am available on 24/7. Thank you.

Hi,

I have just submitted an entry (#29020004) for the contest.
I have attempted something different and would really appreciate your feedback on it.
Do read the description to better understand the idea behind the design.

Warm Regards,
Hari