feedback please on my submission design #28924479 and #28924480 , thanks

Dear Honorable Sir,

Possible feedback on my design #28925525 would be much-appreciated .

Thank you.

We are beginning final review of the designs submitted & will have a design selected by the end of this week. Thank you for your patience and all the great submissions.

Please no more submissions - we are in the final stages of deciding. Thank you!