hi
provide feedback to this design #28853595
also if you want any changes then feel free to tell me

#28853595
thanks

A little less busy. Maybe a different font. Looking at it, if I didn’t know the name, Henry J’s, I’m not sure I would understand what it says. Love the design

Sir please check my design #28854930 and feedback please. Thank you.

do any other designers have that inevitable, it looks a bit like mine feeling,