Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

hello sir,
please check my design, #28782451, #28782452.
thanks and regards.

Dear sir/ma'am, Am I in the right direction? Please check my submissions and provide your valuable feedback for my design #28803994. Hope you gonna love this . Feel free to ask for any kind of change or modifications... And please don't give 1 star or 2 star rating, it's DAMAGE designer's ranking.... :( :(
regards... :) (stay safe)