Hi, I sent you a design, please share with me your opinion.

Hi thanks it’s a bit to out the box I was hoping for something a bit more striking

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #28601517). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED. IF YOU DO NOT LIKE IT PLEASE ELIMINATE THE DESIGN.

Hello. Check, please design. If something needs to change, write to me. Thank you!
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/28633841

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks.!