Sir please check my design #28571781 and feedback please. Thank you.

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provide feedback to this design #28574732
also if you want any changes then feel free to tell me

#28574732
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Hello All

Appreciate the options coming in

yes colourful is the target, catchy design is necessary, if can include a mascot would be great

also pls NOTE: we need the logo in one line preferably .. as even the main signboard on the shop the size is: 6m length x 1.2m height

lets imagine also, we can use the logo on the front and back in full or else only the main logo in the front left side pocket, and full including mascot etc at the backside