Sir please check my design #28220004 and feedback please. I'm waiting for your reply. Thank you.

feedback, please on my submission design #28220747, regards

Hello, may I receive feedback on my design #28222294, so I know whether or not we are on the same page creatively? If you feel as if my work is worth less than 4 stars, I ask you simply eliminate it, as low ratings damage the survivability of designers on the site. Thank you, have a good one!