please feedback my design

hello sir, please provide feedback on my design #28003393 ...

If you don't like my design, please eliminate it rather than giving 1/2/3 star rating.

Best regards ....

Please check my designs #28009876
If you like it, you can give it a star.
If you need improvement, you can provide feedback.
and if you don't like it, you can eliminate it.

You need to know that giving a low rating of a logo will have a bad impact on the designer's rating, as well as a high rating of a logo will have a good impact on the designer's rating.

I do not forbid you to give a low rating, nor do I force you to give a high rating.

Thank you.

please check my new design

Dear Contest Holder, if there’s anything else I can do with any of my entries just let me know. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas