Sir, please check my design #27987454 and feedback, please.

Hello. Please check out my design (#27988385) and send me some feedback :)
Its a draft, should I develope it further?
Thank you :)

feedback, please!

Hi,
I have submitted my design and I appreciate it if you can provide me feedback.
Thank You.

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Please check my designs #28006613
If you like it, you can give it a star.
If you need improvement, you can provide feedback.
and if you don't like it, you can eliminate it.

You need to know that giving a low rating of a logo will have a bad impact on the designer's rating, as well as a high rating of a logo will have a good impact on the designer's rating.

I do not forbid you to give a low rating, nor do I force you to give a high rating.

Thank you.

Please give your feedback. Thanks