please check my design #27560706,, feedback please i will wait for your feedback Thank you

Sir, please check my design #27561242 and feedback, please.

Hello,
Please review my design and let me know your thoughts.

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Hello,
As a designer, it is very challenging to get 4 star rating from 5 star.
Please let me know how can i get that one star back to my design.
Any revision or alteration will welcome.


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Dear Contest Holder, if there’s anything else I can do with any of my entries just let me know. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas