feedback please!

Hi Project Owner,

I have submitted my design. Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction. If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .

Thanks & regards.

Rating guide:
If you don't like this design, leave it with ZERO stars. Or eliminate it without stars. Low 1 and 2 star ratings downgrade the designer's personal rating and has no motivation to come up with new ideas.
Thank you for your understanding.

Hi, Dear contest holder, you replied 'Okay' while rating my submission 2-stars.
How come! I don't understand. :|

feedback pls