feedback please!

submission #26336628

Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.  

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Please read new brief. I’d like more options. Thanks you.

Nobody seems to be getting the "feel" that we are looking for. I created something in Canva as a straight line and a circle and would like your renditions on this.

I am using Bickley Script for the cursive letters in the initials and Old Standard for the block type (not committed to that one if you have suggestions).

I will upload the images I created in the brief. I need somebody to create it for us so we can have all versions for print and online

Any feedback on my submission?

Thank you.