Please feedback me on my design #26193740 and #26193739

Hi, thank you for your submissions.

The logo's are too cartoonish for my taste. I'm looking for something more bold and strong.

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Hi,

I've just responded to you via my favorite of your design submissions. I'd like to choose your design as the winner after a revision. Could you review my comments and see what you think?

Thank you!
-DJ