feedback please on my design #25266274 ,#25266275 thanks

Hi Project Owner,

I have submitted my design having design no. #25291020 Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction. If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .

Thanks & regards.

NOTE:
If you don't like this design, please leave it with ZERO stars. Or eliminate it without stars. Low 1 and 2 star ratings downgrade the designer's personal rating and he has no motivation to come up with new ideas.
Thank you for your understanding

Response to Designer Javed: You should be aware that 3 stars feedback also (immediately) damages a designer's ranking and placement and only 4 and 5 stars are positive. Apologies to the client for mentioning this.