Hi, first let me thank you for inviting me to be the part of your project, I have designed a logo option as per your requirements, please have a look at my entry #24890284 and let me know your feedback. Thank you :)

Dear Sir/Ma'am, I have designed revised logo option, plz have a look at my entry #24903827 and let me know your feedback so it will help me to develop my creativity, But requesting you that plz dont give 1 or 2 star rating bcoz it impacts designers profile rating. Hope you understand, If you dont like the design just eliminate it. Thank you :)

Dear project owner,
your project jumped out at me! I have submitted my idea please check it out.

Will be waiting for your feedback,
Thanks.