Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating.

Best.

please give feedback. if not suitable, please be eliminated

thank you

Hello there,
Thank you for the feedback.I just uploaded my revised design according to your feedback.Please review those design and let me know if those are serve well your need.

Best.