feedback please on my submission design #24785760, #24785761 and #24785762. thanks

Hello, Please give me some feedback and rate my design. Thank you. Sara

If you don't like this design, leave it with ZERO stars. Or eliminate it without stars. Low 1 and 2 star ratings downgrade the designer's personal rating and he has no motivation to come up with new ideas. Thank you for your understanding

Hi, kindly see my design #24837131 please.
Thank you.