Hi, I've submitted a design. Would be great to get your feedback.

Hi there. Appreciate the initial logo design work. I am looking for a "crisper" design, something that would instill a feeling of full confidence and trust in our ability to manage large client investment portfolios and their wealth. I am not sure the logo gives me that feeling. Keep in mind, I am not "great" at articulating these things so I do appreciate your work on this.