Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
Thanks. 

Hi there. Please check my design concept on (#23878140). Thankyou!

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your logo and icon.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

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Hi... Owner
I saw your update, maybe you want something else?
Please give feedback on this design of mine. Maybe i can do something different that you like...

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Please advise if I am on the right track, I'm always ready to deliver you unlimited revisions until your satisfaction.
Thank you