Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
Thanks.

Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
Thanks. 

Please. If you don't like a design - ELIMINATE IT BUT WITHOUT 1 OR 2 STARS. Low ratings downgrade the designer's personal rating and he has no motivation to submit new designs. Or leave the design with ZERO STARS if it does not match your ideas

Thanks for Your rating. Please, let me know if you want any revision regarding my design.