I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #23782958, #23782959, #23782960, #23782961.
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thanks and regards.

Hello there,

If you could please provide feedback on my design, I would be grateful.

Thank you,
Sarah