feedback pls

feedback please... on my submission design 23667296 and 23667373 , regards

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track. If you don't like my design, please eliminate that rather than giving 1 or 2 star rating.

Best.

Don't over complicate this. Straight up copy the "Snacks" example from the brief.

Consider putting the "Co" of "Blessing Co" on a separate line, right justified.

Start rating and eliminating designs for better results...

Hello there,
Thank you for the feedback.I just uploaded my revised design according to your feedback.Please review those design and let me know if those are serve well your need.

Best.

Hi.. please provide me feedback and rate, for next revision !
thank you

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Please provide feedback design numb. DesId #23674907

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Feedback on design #23674609 please?