Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and no low star ratings, please.

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Hi
Please do check the design submissions (#23412847) (#23412846) (#23412845) and share your feedback with me. This is a same design concept of my 1st design with some typeface and orientation options.
Thank You
Arun