Hi,
Please have a look at my designs, I hope you'll like it.
Looking forward to your feedback.
Thank you :)

Looking better. Look at this image as an example I drew.

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Make the "O" look like center of eye.

Hmmm...Looks like I can't share a link. I want the O to look more like the center colored part of the eye like an iris. Also, make the design of rocket ship more modern.with cleaner lines.

Would like to have your feedback on my concept.