hi, please check my designs and give the feedback for me.
my subs:
#22567212
#22567213

i hope you like it, thank you :)

Hi contest holder.

Thanks for rate to my revision design. If you think
Thats not enough for you, u can request another change.
Or another idea. I"m really glad for help.


Regards.

Hi!
Wondering how it goes?
And please take a look at my new submitions :)
Thanks!

Hi, Have you left the building?
Don't give up now. Struggle with us :)

REgards! Tom.