Please give me a feedback on my design #22356301. If you don't like it, please eliminate it, don't need to give poor ratings (Below 3star). Thanks in advance.

Please give me a feedback on my another design #22358236. If you don't like it, please eliminate it, don't need to give poor ratings (Below 3star). Thanks in advance.

Hi there!
I would like you to send feedback in my art,
that I can submit the changes and I improve the logo to reach the goal.

Kind regards

NovoArtDesign