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please check my entries tell me if i am in right direction.
#21908882 #21908883 #21908884,
i have design brochure so please it line wise and you will undersatand.

THANKS

I've reviewed your designs. I'm not looking for a brochure. I'm looking for GRAPHICS for several mediums.

ok mam...i am working on this contest.

Further, your current design displays a new home. This infers were are in the housing business. We are in the Commercial real estate finance business. We “find” money so developers and build large commercial properties/buildings.

I have made the changes...
please check and feedback...

Thanks.

A few things
A - Our corporate name is DORR not Door.
B - you are getting closer with a 'cityscape" background BUT... we see lots or this visual in our industry. The CN tower is over used in graphics.
C - we help get financing for LAND purchase, land development, building development and a range of building to develop - housing, apartments/condos, townhouses, plazas, maybe high rises
D - Makes the green DARKER
E - Are you familiar with the movie The Matrix? can you create something with the scrolling numbers AND dollar ($) signs....... Dorr Capital does an incredible job with using financial savvy to create excellent financial deals for its customers

Thank you for your feedback,
I will made the changes....
Thanks again.

I have made the changes...Check #21936619.Please feedback quickly because the remaining time for this contest is short.

Thanks and have a nice day.