feedback please ..

hello sir,
feedback please on my design, #21517596, #21517597, #21517598..

thanks and regards..

please sir check my design #21518193

HI! Love your work! I like the colors. I am looking for something more whimisical and fun - a scout character that has our Parachute logo on his hat or shirt. Could you please try again?

Can you please suggest some changes so that my logo becomes you top choice and I get an opportunity to work with you ?