Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Best.

feedback please ......

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Please feedback ...

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.

Thank you!

Best regards,
Coco