feedback please #20432801 and #20432802, regards

sir kindly please check my submission design #20434468 ,#20434469 and #20434470 and give me your valuable feedback please

please check the design and sent your feedback

Truly liked it. One from my favorites! Would it be possible to make a slogan more visible? I loved the colours too. Would it be possible to try other colours to have more options. Maybe green. ( not very bright)
First thing to adjust ( the priority ) the slogan. I need it more visible. Thank you for your talent and timr

sir please check my design #20444517

Hi, please check #20449801
Thanks :)

Hello, Project Owner.
I just submitted my design.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes.
Possible Comment on my design would be muchly appreciated.

Regards,
Symbolman.