sir kindly please check my submission design #20369519 ,#20369520 and #20369523 and give me your valuable feedback please

Would you please check design #20372447, thanks

Hello Project Owner,
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes.
Possible comment on my design would be much appreciated.
Thanks & regards,
Slant Line Media