sir please check my design #20316778 and #20316779 #20316780

Hi,
Any feedback or updates?
Thanks,

I’ve chosen the one I want but need it revised right away still waiting on revision. Thank you

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

If you want completely new one and if you have a sketch or thought ..please explain ?

Give me another chance .