CHECK MY DESIGN #20189881 AND #20189882, REGARDS

Hello, Project Owner.
I just submitted my design.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes.
Possible Comment on my design would be muchly appreciated.

Regards,
Symbolman.

still not like ?
Did you check my last design Options ? what do you think ? If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

If you want completely new one and if you have a sketch or thought ..please explain ?

Give me another chance .