Feedback please.

Hello, Project Owner.
I just submitted my design.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes.
Possible Comment on my design would be muchly appreciated.

Regards,
Symbolman.

If we could try to incorporate a stomach into the design as well - that would be lovely. Possibly by making the 2 SS's at the end of SUPPRESS into a stomach. Thank you.

Revision sent kindly check thanks!

Dear CH,i wait for your next update.Best Regards