im not loving it overall, ive added logo examples i like perhaps follow those. you are on the right track :)

can you look through my design examples?

can you look through my design examples?

please look through design examples

please look through design examples

please check the design and provide your precious feedback on #19451286

I'll look through your design examples and get back to you with the revised version asap.

Kind Regards,
Design Nation.

please check my new submission #19452422 and #19452423 ,regards

i already send my revision. please check and give feedback

Hello,
Just submitted new proposals, based on your attachments. Please, take a look and if you could, provide the feedback.

Best :) Sara