Kindly review my design #19477562

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hi, please rate and feedback

please feedback

Hello owner,
Kindly check #19487122, #19486900, #19486852 . Ready to make any modifications as you want. please provide feedback and If you do not like a design - Just eliminate without putting one or two stars. please. Thank you
Kind Regards,
Blessing Angel

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?