feedback please design #19057312 and #19057313 , regards

Hi there
Many thanks for your design.

Hi there, many thanks for your design. This has good potential, I like the red with the fist at the top. Are you able to change the fist to a single fist at the top and make the outline of the fist black? Are you able to try and incorporate the kanji for kenkyokan at the top of the logo and the kanji for gojuryu at the bottom in some form ? (using attached files or another brush type kanji font). The logo needs to be able to used as a badge on a karate uniform primarily

Or kenkyokan in english at the top and the kanji for gojuryu at the bottom in some form

sir please dont mind . its not the right platform to give feedback , pleas feedback e on my design personally , i will try my level best ,regards

please check my new submission design #19063624 and #19063625 ,regards

Will do thank you

Apologies I am new to this

Yes good