I hope you like it, but free to request any change or give comment on this design. I am happy to be working together with you, your communication will improve what I made. Thank you. :)

Hello!

Please let me know your feedback for my design.

Kind regards,
John

Could you provide some feedback?

Hello,

Could you give us a feedback please?
Thanks!

Regards

Any news for us?

what is happenent ?

Hi can I have your feedback?

Can we finish this?