feedback please

any feedback please on my design #17549271

please give feedback.

thank you

Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions.
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/17554691
Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply. Thanks

Great job! We would like to select you as the winner, but I have a few questions.
1. Can we make some changes to this design?
2. Would we be able to have a few variations (color, boldness, etc. Small stuff)
3. Can we also get a secondary logo done?