feedback please #20126217 and #20126218, regards

hello sir,
feedback please on my design, #20127639...#20127640...#20127641..

thanks..

hello sir,
feedback please on my design, #20127639...#20127640...#20127641..

thanks..

Hello,
please feedback on my design #20129365

Feedback please.

Feedback please, #20149688

Hello owner of the contest, low ratings - one and two stars only demotivate designers to participate with new projects. Because low ratings lead the designer's rating to a crash. If you do not like a design, you better eliminate it without putting one or two stars. Thank you for your understanding..

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