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Hi, thanks for the design however it is too busy for me, the concept is a camouflage theme with bold lettering that really stands out. Its supposed to be a play on words as camouflage means to hide, blend in etc...

Hi, thanks for the design it is not far off however the concept is a camouflage theme with bold lettering that really stands out. Its supposed to be a play on words as camouflage means to hide, blend in etc...