Hi, interesting project, congrats! One question: how obvious do you want the "organ" part to be? In your concept mock-up, the organs are very obvious, in your face. I have no problem with that, however I want to know if you favor a metaphor. Thanks.

Hi RoundYellow,

Thanks for your message. In terms of the prominence of an organ - we're not completely sold on its presence - but feel it's likely important to conveying the subject matter of the film.

We're really after a strong piece of detailed art though - something that is striking, high-concept, complex and very interesting. We put together the mockup as we love the hourglass idea - because it conveys one life becoming another - and would love to see that played with - but with a lot of creativity.

Hope that helps and thanks for your interest,

Hi

I worked on some more ideas. Can you please have a look at my last submissions and tell me what you would like to be changed?

I am committed to provide you with an extraordinary piece of artwork that will convey the message of the documentary.
Feedback will help to direct me in the way that suits your needs and liking.