Hey!

A few general remarks:

1) Not too childish
2) Not too corporate
3) The main thing is to write Tobine in a cool way

You can see Tobine perform here: [Non image link removed]
Ferievenn is just the name of her new song (it's difficult to translate, but directly it translates "Holiday Friend" (a friend you get on a holiday). Focus on "Tobine" now. The winner will be selected based on Tobine only, and then asked to just write "Ferievenn" in a matching way.

Thanks for your entries so far!

Hi . Thanks for rating my design . It would also be helpful for the both of us to get into the perfect design if you could also leave some useful feedback .
I hope that you'll consider to leave some .

Cheers ,
Gr4pika

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